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  Anonymous Coward, 23 Jan 2004 @ 10:47am

  
  

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  Your title implies that the *ad* was sued by the RIAA.
  
  "Pepsi ad uses kids sued by RIAA " is what you meant.

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    Javaguy, 23 Jan 2004 @ 12:47pm

    
    

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    Made perfect sense to me.

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    Mike (profile), 23 Jan 2004 @ 4:07pm

    
    

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    "Pepsi ad uses kids sued by RIAA " is what you meant.
    
    Yeah, that's much better. Thanks, I've changed it.

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      Anonymous Coward, 23 Jan 2004 @ 4:26pm

      
      

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      Excellent, Mike -- it was a dangling participle.
      
      Javaguy should visit:
      http://trc.ucdavis.edu/bajaffee/SAS90B/Course%20Content/Grammar%20Syllabus/dangling.htm
      
      to understand why it shouldn't sound right

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