in this section "Almost two years later, an ex-boyfriend of Weimer's (Thomas Beal) told investigators that she had shot Haith and told him that the blood on her clothes came from the victim."
it is hard to read, i believe instead of saying "she," you should say "Weimer." Further instead of "told him" it should say she "told her ex boyfriend."
try this:
in this section "Almost two years later, an ex-boyfriend of Weimer's (Thomas Beal) told investigators that Weimer had shot Haith and told her ex boyfriend that the blood on her clothes came from the victim."
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in this section "Almost two years later, an ex-boyfriend of Weimer's (Thomas Beal) told investigators that she had shot Haith and told him that the blood on her clothes came from the victim."
it is hard to read, i believe instead of saying "she," you should say "Weimer." Further instead of "told him" it should say she "told her ex boyfriend."
try this:
in this section "Almost two years later, an ex-boyfriend of Weimer's (Thomas Beal) told investigators that Weimer had shot Haith and told her ex boyfriend that the blood on her clothes came from the victim."
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